Nature's other rainbow

by Brittany C   Mar 15, 2008


Colors of the rainbow
in the little flowers
all around me.
Bright and beautiful
so soft and gentle.

The sun is warm
it's rays upon me.
I lay in the grass
thinking of the one I love
while bees buzz by my head.

Nature is so wonderful.
I always thought of love
as a part of nature,
it is so beautiful and
nothing else is like it.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I really liked this. Once again you painted a lovely picture with your words. However I thought the last stanza sorta just made it drop off all of a sudden..
    I still enjoyed it, though.

    Well done,
    -Paula.

  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Very true. It was cute, i liked it. One thing.. its a lot like a lot of other poems... i noticed that. The same thoughts, but i liked the last stanza and i liked how you talked about someone you loved and related them together, i thought that was good. Well, nice job. It keep me interested.
    *Chaotic Angel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I found a couple typos:

    so soft and gentel. "gentle"

    The sun is warm
    it's rays apon me. (upon)

    I have a suggestion about the ending:

    it is so beautiful and
    nothing else is like it. (there's nothing else......or nothing compares)

    Other than that, it is short but sweet, wonderful imagery and meaningful. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good poem until the last stanza. The last stanza could've been more poetic. Otherwise, it was a beautiful poem. Good write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    This one I like more. You use the same as and sentence issues again then a few comma issues, but other than that I liked it. I like the last stanza. It was a creative thought. This one's a four.