by Brittany C Mar 15, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Colors of the rainbow |
by Crystal Gaze
I really liked this. Once again you painted a lovely picture with your words. However I thought the last stanza sorta just made it drop off all of a sudden.. |
Very true. It was cute, i liked it. One thing.. its a lot like a lot of other poems... i noticed that. The same thoughts, but i liked the last stanza and i liked how you talked about someone you loved and related them together, i thought that was good. Well, nice job. It keep me interested. |
by Rachel RTVW
I found a couple typos: |
Very good poem until the last stanza. The last stanza could've been more poetic. Otherwise, it was a beautiful poem. Good write! |
This one I like more. You use the same as and sentence issues again then a few comma issues, but other than that I liked it. I like the last stanza. It was a creative thought. This one's a four. |