I really liked this piece, at first glance it was rather dainting to have the many lines of "its funny how"; but reading it, I think it's a great write =)

I love the ending, and you've got some great rhyme in here, really good flow.

Keep it up, and thanks for the comment on mine =)

Lizzy, xxxx

Great work! It really makes you think. All the things u said are so true. Keep it up!