Confussed Little Heart

This poem might be short but it's message is meaningful none the less. I actually liked the title too because it seemed to fit and it actually made me quite curious about your poem. I have to admit that I think that your write is really relateable to me, I mean who hasn't got hurt before? I also like the question in the last stanza because it encourages the reader to think, which makes your poem more memorable.

Short, but very nice.
The concept is relatable, and the read was nice.
It wasn't my favourite, but I didn't think it was awful.
Im not gonna down vote, because I think it wasn't that bad at all..
So Im gonna give you a 5.5. :)

--Paula,

Great Job! touched me deeply! (5/5)

I like this one much better;

even through the spelling mistakes and all that, the way it was worded was good. my only real suggestion is for you to double check your work and at least put it through the spellcheck.

Your poems are good, but they lack emotion! Take your time to write, think of a new line as it comes to you, don't try too hard, it just messes with the flow
love Tara-Kay