Correction: The last line in your first stanza you're using the wrong to. It's too.
Same thing in the last line of the second stanza.

Overall I didn't like it very much. I want to assume that this is an unrhyming poem and that the two rhymes you do have in here were just by coincidence. It just didn't catch my attention like I wanted it too. I'm really sorry. It just wasn't my favorite. 2.

I like the concept to this poem. Its cute, and easy to relate to. I wasn't thrilled with the poem, but it was a good write! And a decent read :)

Good!

Awesome! short and I like it, hmm..kinda of an abstract write!

Keep it up!

thanks for the comment!

I feel like this piece was unfinished and you could add so much more emotion to described the situation. It was a quick read but I was looking for me. Overall good write *4/5*

Your poems are good, but they lack emotion! Take your time to write, think of a new line as it comes to you, don't try too hard, it just messes with the flow
love Tara-Kay

I like this one much better;

even through the spelling mistakes and all that, the way it was worded was good. my only real suggestion is for you to double check your work and at least put it through the spellcheck.

Great Job! touched me deeply! (5/5)

Short, but very nice.
The concept is relatable, and the read was nice.
It wasn't my favourite, but I didn't think it was awful.
Im not gonna down vote, because I think it wasn't that bad at all..
So Im gonna give you a 5.5. :)

--Paula,

This poem might be short but it's message is meaningful none the less. I actually liked the title too because it seemed to fit and it actually made me quite curious about your poem. I have to admit that I think that your write is really relateable to me, I mean who hasn't got hurt before? I also like the question in the last stanza because it encourages the reader to think, which makes your poem more memorable.