Still Thinking...

by Ike Dizzle   Mar 15, 2008


Still Thinking

Why do I remember you?
Why are you on my mind?
I ve tried hard to forget you
But you are one of a kind

You keep getting hurt
And why do I care
I should try to stop it
But all I can do is stare

He treats you like dirt
He gives you stress
I want to step in
But it s none of my business

I tried to numb the pain
But I never had a clue
No matter how hard I try
Can t stop thinking of you

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  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    I liked this poem a lot! It flowed quite nice and it is very well written! Good Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Another good piece. I liked the story and what was being said, but I didn't like the last line of the third stanza. I'm not a big fan of half rhymes, in fact, I'm a disliker of them, sorry, but apart from that it was good.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    HEy good job. I have heard this from my boyfriend with the past guy i went out with and now my ex says it about him but i hope everything works out for you. Try talking to her about it if its ever possible out of my own expersince i didn't lisen the first couple times but she may start to rellize. good job once again. 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Aww i liked this,
    it was really good..if people are getting hurt in different ways, and you cant stop loving that person i think that you should step in...show her that there will be brighter days.

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