Aww i liked this,
it was really good..if people are getting hurt in different ways, and you cant stop loving that person i think that you should step in...show her that there will be brighter days.

HEy good job. I have heard this from my boyfriend with the past guy i went out with and now my ex says it about him but i hope everything works out for you. Try talking to her about it if its ever possible out of my own expersince i didn't lisen the first couple times but she may start to rellize. good job once again. 5/5 keep up the good work

Another good piece. I liked the story and what was being said, but I didn't like the last line of the third stanza. I'm not a big fan of half rhymes, in fact, I'm a disliker of them, sorry, but apart from that it was good.

Brad

I liked this poem a lot! It flowed quite nice and it is very well written! Good Job!