Aw i liked this poem

I must admit, I thought this piece was going to be crap, but I wanted to read it because you're a guy, and to my knowledge, there's not too many of us on here.

Anyway, I did actually like this poem. I liked what it was saying, it all seemed rather true. I especially like the bit about pursuing your feelings for someone, getting shut down, but then trying again anyway, it was funny, but its true, that's why I'd say that was my favorite part. Usually, now, I'd say something negative, not for the sake of being negative obviously, but to tell the truth, but to be honest, I can't really see anything bad about this piece.

Brad

Hmm.. well, some people say that alcohol is like a truth serum.. you know if the whole world were drunk, it would be a much happier place.. haha
neways, i know EXACTLY wht ur talking about here.. :(
i noticed the somewhat random rhyming and usually i dont like it but it worked in this one.. nice format..

! g0t y0u 0n thAt wh3n y0u sa!D...
dr!Nk!N !sZ a th!Ng thAT h3Lps y0u c0p3...
mak3s y0u fe3Ls b3Tta...

ev3n th0 juSt fA a m0m3nt...