She Is

by Lu   Mar 16, 2008


In her voice I hear sadness
though she tries to cover it so well
when I hear her laughter
my heart begins to swell

Pain has become an enemy
she battles it with pride
in our conversations
anguish, she tries to hide

She carries weight on her shoulders
enough to break the strongest soul
offering a helping hand to others
because her heart is made of gold

Her writing not complex
emotion weaves the lines
what lays within her heart
is what her poetry defines

Often offering words of comfort
expression sincere and true
a shoulder to cry upon
helping to pull you through

I don't need words complex
to express my love
she is an inspiration
and all the things above

Do I believe in angels ?
Yes I think God sent one to me
though she doesn't have wings nor a hallow
she is a beautiful soul I call ... Cindy
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Dedication to Cindy from RTVW ..... love ya girly!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Overall I liked it, but I think the second line in the sixth stanza could have been a tiny bit longer. I think the forth stanza was my favorite, followed by stanzas three and five.

    Brad

    P.S. Thank you for your comment on my piece, 'Me in the Meltdown', and I'm glad you, as well as other liked it, though I myself am disappointed in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by cataclysmicSoul

    Aww this poem is really nice
    love that is coming from the heart
    lucky cindyX

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Beautiful poem, it seemed to flow very well and kept me reading until the end, very nice gift to cindy-----tara

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A amazing dedication to such a true friend. I agree wholeheartedly to all the above also mate. I think us truly blessed to have such a wonderful person in our lives. This piece speaks the true and no you don't need fancy words to say i love you.. Awesome job Lu!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Ahhh my sweet Luanne, such a lovely poem from you, it is beautifully written as always, thank you for your lovely message on my board, tis always a great relief to hear from you. Tim

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