Comments : She Is

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    I know you know I am in tears reading this. What a beaitiful gift :) You know you are my insperation. Joining RTVW changed my life. I love each and evry member they are all special. Thank you so much for this. I love you.
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Luanne,

    Who could not love a soul as beautiful as she?
    I love your dedication to our sweet Cindy, I know for sure it means the world to her!

    Much love,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    A very beautifully written tribute poem Luanne.....nicely done with the flow, and rhyme scheme....

    I know this means so much to Cindy....well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Her writing not complex
    emotion weaves the lines
    what lays within her heart
    is what her poetry defines

    Hey Luanne,

    This is so nice of you to dedicate such lovely poem.
    The above stanza....well i guess this is the reason that i fell for Cindy so hard. I just love her poetry, its so simple yet so deep.

    Great poem for a great person...she is surely lucky to have friends like you.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    This is very beautiful poem indeed. it's very beautiful when you care about your friends, am sure Cindy is very proud of you

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Luanne,
    You have ultimately caught Cindy within your words describing her to a tee. I love the poem and it is very befitting of her personality. She manages to hide the pain so well an offer up a kind word or condolences to you if you are down. She is truly an inspiration and I think you have done a wonderful job with a tribute to our loving Cindy. Yes she is an angel and doesn't realize it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Ahhh my sweet Luanne, such a lovely poem from you, it is beautifully written as always, thank you for your lovely message on my board, tis always a great relief to hear from you. Tim

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A amazing dedication to such a true friend. I agree wholeheartedly to all the above also mate. I think us truly blessed to have such a wonderful person in our lives. This piece speaks the true and no you don't need fancy words to say i love you.. Awesome job Lu!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Beautiful poem, it seemed to flow very well and kept me reading until the end, very nice gift to cindy-----tara

  • 16 years ago

    by cataclysmicSoul

    Aww this poem is really nice
    love that is coming from the heart
    lucky cindyX

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Overall I liked it, but I think the second line in the sixth stanza could have been a tiny bit longer. I think the forth stanza was my favorite, followed by stanzas three and five.

    Brad

    P.S. Thank you for your comment on my piece, 'Me in the Meltdown', and I'm glad you, as well as other liked it, though I myself am disappointed in it.