by Cindy
Luanne |
by Ingrid
Luanne, |
by debbylyn
A very beautifully written tribute poem Luanne.....nicely done with the flow, and rhyme scheme.... |
Her writing not complex |
This is very beautiful poem indeed. it's very beautiful when you care about your friends, am sure Cindy is very proud of you |
Luanne, |
by Timothy r
Ahhh my sweet Luanne, such a lovely poem from you, it is beautifully written as always, thank you for your lovely message on my board, tis always a great relief to hear from you. Tim |
by Elapsed
A amazing dedication to such a true friend. I agree wholeheartedly to all the above also mate. I think us truly blessed to have such a wonderful person in our lives. This piece speaks the true and no you don't need fancy words to say i love you.. Awesome job Lu!! |
by Tara
Beautiful poem, it seemed to flow very well and kept me reading until the end, very nice gift to cindy-----tara |
Aww this poem is really nice |
Overall I liked it, but I think the second line in the sixth stanza could have been a tiny bit longer. I think the forth stanza was my favorite, followed by stanzas three and five. |