You!!
by soccer beast Mar 16, 2008
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If theres no one that means |
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16 years ago
Cool, short, sweet, lovely
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16 years ago
by Brittany C
I kinda liked it. It had a nice flow but the poem needs a couple things "heps me when i fall" the "heps" i think you meant "helps". It is a really short poem try to make it a little longer so that the emotions will come out better. 4/5
