Wow :D i really liked this one. it had a great flow and i loved the word choice. 5/5

Aww this is a sweet poem, I give you a high five lol 5/5

Awe, very beautiful. I liked how the moods changed from the beginning to the end of the piece. :] And i can really relate to this. Only difference is that I have a tragedy. [My life is always been a tragedy] But anyway. This poem was beautifully written and perfectly worded. great write. 5/5.

Such a nice poem. it's great how the 1st and the last stanza are parallel but so different in meaning and mood.

Now my heart feels like a feather,
The storm inside me has subsided <-- these lines are so amazing and emotional!

all in all, grat write. 5/5

True love does that to a person. Your words potray that perfectly! Amazing job!
Keep writting!
-Arielle

This is a really good poem. I really loved the emotion in this. Although in the last stanza, first line, it didn't sound right. Try to change it a bit because it didn't sound right. It's great though. 5/5

.:CiNdY:.