Comments : One World

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, what powerful words! This poem really gets you thinking! Good Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Way to make the world feel guilty! Well, you made me feel guilty at least. This is a topic that is really important and yet no-one seems to write about it very much (including myself), I guess that kind of links to what this poem describes as "People look, but do not see,
    They see, but do not care,"

    I also love the way you describe blindness as a disease, makes us who are well-off compared to a lot of other people seem almost as feeble as the "poor" people.

    Em xXx