Comments : The Betrayal

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. there is seriously like soooo much emotion in this. it's a story telling poem....

    where o where did you get this one, darling?

    (she wasn't more beautiful than thee. that is impossible. i know this for a fact. she wasn't more likable either. ^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    This was crazy, to the point I really got lost. But it was really a lovely poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Woooooow that was a awesome poem very very good u r one of my fave authers on here

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, I'm speechless. This is amazing. 5/5, Em