My true life

by sweet escape   Mar 16, 2008


I've tried many ways to end my live
for now I've taken to the knife.
i see the blood drip down my arm
but this does not cause alarm.
i feel something i know is real
and i choose pain to help me deal.
before i return to my zombie state,
i feel alive, this is my fate.
to cry, cut, and heal again
and to know I'll never truly mend.
i live in darkness, day and night
i just don't have the strength to put up a fight.
so here i sit and weep
Finaly cutting and falling to sleep
to sleep, to dream, to never wake
this is what, of my life, i make.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    Omg,, this is really good..
    alot of emotion..
    i loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I dont like the 1 block poem i hope you divide it into paragraphs , mmm,

    fro teh others, i can feel the pain maybe little boring from your life , and the cutting feelings, dotn want to live , !!

    these all are creepy feelings sweet escape , it is a wonderfull way you put those feelings, and a great poem , but , i hope you beguin to lose this feeling ,

  • 16 years ago

    by Its Jessiika Baybee

    Thiis Is A Good Poem But If This Is Abwt Yuu ...I Think Yur A Stupiid Girl Forr Doing That Bcoz Yu Have A Talent /x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A very sad poem yet so amazing!
    i loved it.
    i can sort of relate.
    yer an amazing writer, never quit writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by ThomasBlackburn

    So sad, im sorry for your pain

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