..this is so good...so sad...it made meh cry... beautifully written :) good poem
5/5!

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Wow u should go pro dis was so dark cold n wow trully greatly amazingly writeeen

Sam, this is very deep.
"to cry, cut, and heal again
and to know I'll never truly mend."
A sure idea of personal pain. Very good work. Well done.

Beautifully writen
Deep emotional poem!

I loved it!

5/5
Danielle
xx

Wow!..it's relly sad!!.but really good!! so descriptive and full of emotion..i don't know if u r really going thru that, but i'm sorry.for u

So sad,.but i really like it,.he3,.5/5

I realy have the same feeling you have now and how you want to end this pain and cut this vain but finnaly we still feel the pain , great jop

That was so sick!!! Cant get over it!!!!

Beautifully wirtten and expressed!!!

While dark, I myself was a cutter in what seems now to be a past life... I relate to the emptiness, and the need to feel power and control over anything even if it is your own pain or your own body that you exact it upon.

There are no words to describe what this makes me feel, except..... not alone.

5/5!!!!!!!!!

Truthfully this poem isn't as great as the other poem I commented on named "Now:what I am" but I still can tell you put a lot of effort into it...
The very first 2 lines.
"I've tried many ways to end my live
for now I've taken to the knife."
Didn't quite make sense though I understood it its just a typing error. and the lines after that:
"i see the blood drip down my arm
but this does not cause alarm."
I loveddd that rhyme it was so catch and it went into such deep emotion =] xxxxxx

So sad, im sorry for your pain

A very sad poem yet so amazing!
i loved it.
i can sort of relate.
yer an amazing writer, never quit writing.

Thiis Is A Good Poem But If This Is Abwt Yuu ...I Think Yur A Stupiid Girl Forr Doing That Bcoz Yu Have A Talent /x

I dont like the 1 block poem i hope you divide it into paragraphs , mmm,

fro teh others, i can feel the pain maybe little boring from your life , and the cutting feelings, dotn want to live , !!

these all are creepy feelings sweet escape , it is a wonderfull way you put those feelings, and a great poem , but , i hope you beguin to lose this feeling ,

Omg,, this is really good..
alot of emotion..
i loved it.