Am I Real??

by ECILA ice   Mar 16, 2008


I can feel the liquid running
Flowing endlessly through my veins and arteries
It's warm fluid that drains the chill in me,
Is this enough to prove that I exist?

I engulf the oxygen around me
As much as my lungs can endure
And release it as carbon dioxide,
Will it be enough to verify that I'm alive?

I can feel the thin flesh covering my body
That hides the bony figure of my being
That conceals the anatomy of a human
Is this enough to attest that I live?

Because despite of these all,
This tangible creature where I'm entrapped
Seems lifeless in your eyes...
And a helpless ghost in your arms

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very good poem. Very impressive writing. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awwwwwwwww....
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  • 16 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by steven l gaines jr

    I love the word content (context)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Powerful
    emotional
    great vocabulary
    good rhythm

    yeah i like it