by Tim Mauntler
I liked the overall message and loved that you didn't force the rhymes... the flow was great... now that i think about it, i should have given you a 5/5... lol, sorry |
by Daz Mellow
Lol the last two line was priceless, and I like the message over all. Anyhoo, good write. ^_^ |
Again really good poem, my favorite lines are... |