I like this but I don't think it's your best. I really like the idea behind it and the rhyme and flow are great, I just thought it could be a little longer. Maybe it's just me. What there is is great, and I think that the last stanza is a great way to round it off because it's like you're sitting there sulking. But I felt like there was something else that could be put in the middle. I'm not sure what, just something. Maybe something about the "truth that I sow" growing?

Em xXx