Tears Of An Angel

by Dennis   Mar 16, 2008


All alone at night
His reality then sets in
Dwelling in his mind
Of how alone he really is

The tears flow from his eyes
Running out of control
As the silence of the night
Seems to consume his soul

And she stands next to him
With so much love in her heart
Feeling all of his pain
In the silence of the dark

She speaks words of love to him
Words he cannot hear
She holds him in her arms
He doesn't even know she's there

She whispers to him aloud
I love you so my dear
I've been with you for eternity
And I so share your despair

For I am your angel
Who wished for you to be mine
And the Good Lord told me
It will all happen in time

I've watched you grow as a child
Into the man you are today
I've always been here at your side
And beside you I shall stay

I've watched you fall in love
Watched your tender heart break
My tears fell from heaven
Could you not feel my pain

Now I patiently wait
For the time you come to me
Only then will you know
How much I truly love thee

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  • 16 years ago

    by JoyAnn

    Very amazing. instigated tears of my own! a timely reminder that we are never alone, even when it does appear that way. very sweet, and very beautiful (: great job (: 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by cataclysmicSoul

    I really liked this poem was really touching
    and the title only made it much more nicer
    great jobX

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Thank you very much Rachel. You are absolutely correct...that doesn't sound right does it? I'll make a change to it right now :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I like the poem except for this part:
    ^She speaks unheard words of love
    Words he cannot hear^

    If they are unheard then we know he can not hear them. It seems as you have forced the rhyme in this part.

    Other than that, I thought your flow was consistant throughout the rest of the piece. It is a beautifully penned dedication of love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    This is very beautiful, and i can relate to it in many ways. i seem to always be beside someone, bringing them off their knees. very good

    5/5

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