Wow! totally loved this poem, i find myself feeling the same way sometimes. Cant think of anything else to say, it was freaking great!! awesome work. 5/5

Coolness. ^_^ Yeah I've seen that word a few times when deciding what words to use in my poems. I thought it was awesome. Short yet sweet. A five from me for sure.

This was such a great poem. I felt the hate in this. It was very powerful. I especially loved the rhyming in it. It made the poem so much better. Very good job! 5/5

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Ive had a life close to this but i have finally turned 18 which bring somewhat a smile to my face, i love the meter it was great i cannot find anything worn with this poem so great job 5/5