Beautiful. I really dont read nature poems, but I definately loved this one.

"Carry us cautiously
for we are defenseless and fragile
like a newborn child"
^^this part stood out to me the most. The similie was perfect.

Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5

Beautiful poem..^^ i also dont read much of this type of poetry.. i've wrote a few nature poems but not that many.. usually when i read this type it has to be able to catch my attention and make me want to read more.. and you did just that. i was interested. i liked it. you did a good job. 5/5