by natyy
Hi..I really lyk this poem. Its beautiful. |
I absolutely love this poem!! |
by Goodbye
WOW. A-m-a-z-i-n-g you are... |
Aww, this poem is so sad, yet such a beautiful poem. The words are incredible and the flow fit just perfect. You really described the feeling with every single word you wrote. You did an amazing job with this. Great job! 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Wow I used to be able to relate to this one. It's sad but I really like it. The flow was great and the rhyming was wonderful. 5/5 |
by Blissful
First off I really liked the title. It captured my attention and made me want to read more which good titles should do. The imagery in this was haunting and sad with phrases like "bleeding soul". The imagery was just flawlessly expressed and the poem just captivated me from beginning to end. The last line was flawless and so heartbreaking that it left me with a BANG but I wanted more. The flow was good but in some parts shaky because you tried to force rhyme. All in all I truly did enjoy this because I could tell it was well thought out and from the heart the way all excellent poems should be. Well done *5/5* |
by ashley
Wow! lol i am very impressed!!!! your r an awesome writer and will go far! keep writing! |
by Candy 3y3s
Hey...awesomeee poem! Especially the last line...too good! Keep up the good work! <3 |
First of all, I really liked the title. :] |
OUTSTANDING WORK.... I am amazed by the talent that you have. I only wish that I was capable to write the way you can... 5/5 |