by Wings Of Flames Mar 16, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
There once was a time, |
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece [: With short lines that pack a punch, and really feeling the presence of your heart, peering through the lines: I'd say it was a well written poem indeed. |
Once again I thought this was a well written poem, and in fact, everything I wrote about the other poem goes for this too. Although, I will say that I thought this piece had a little more to it, it felt more real, more alive, more from yourself. |
Im in the same situation! |