Comments : Motional

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Im in the same situation!
    This poem said so much && those words were from the heart
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Once again I thought this was a well written poem, and in fact, everything I wrote about the other poem goes for this too. Although, I will say that I thought this piece had a little more to it, it felt more real, more alive, more from yourself.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece [: With short lines that pack a punch, and really feeling the presence of your heart, peering through the lines: I'd say it was a well written poem indeed.

    Write on,
    Take care,
    N*