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by Silent Screams Mar 16, 2008 category : Love, romance / desired love
The time was right The darkness set in There she ran Once again The pureness gone, Now tainted innocence Now she flees the horror With No common sense She falls again, Through the dark She can feel The speed of her heart. She's Running now, Once more she falls. At Someone's Feet. Someone she had called. She looks up now, There he stands Worry etched into his features A Worry She understands. She jumps up and clings Onto him tight And with a passionate kiss, She forgot this Terrifying Night.
by withlove
I like it really simple but still really deep has a nice flow and the rhyming is pretty good-doesnt sound like you were trying too hard to make it rhyme good job 5/5