Cant hold on with ur love

by Amber   Mar 16, 2008


A girl once loved this boy aloft. She told him " I'll love you till the day I die". They both smiled and went on with there love. One day they ended it...so she felt so much pain that she walked out in front of his car and he hit her ..he asked her " Why did you do that?" she said, " I told you I will love you till the day I die, I just couldn't take it anymore not being able to love you so I wanted to die so I wouldn't have to love you anymore."....Yes I did make up this story so don't think its real.....love is just a slow way to suicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Omg thats so sad But I relly Loved it and your right love kinda is a slow suicide

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Amazing loved it! keep up great worx!