Wow.. your poetry has really leapt since the last time I read your work.. This is (sorry) so poetic..! You have described an inner concern, and you have portrayed the very essence.. You understand the illness (am I allowed to call it that?), so well from a 3rd person, rather than a sufferer, and you see the perspective of the ignorant.. the line mentioning the sandwich.. amazing.. Truly, you have done such a good job with this piece. 5/5 for sure. xx

C Cattaway -

Of course you can call it an illness, that's exactly what it is. I thank you for recognising that.

I don't know when you last read my poetry but I am a sufferer of an eating disorder, not just a 3rd person.

Thank you for your lovely comment!! xxx