Trapped soul

by David   Mar 16, 2008


The fading glass it falls to the floor
it shatters to the many many doors
there is a door that wants to take
a soul of trapping to release a mistake

the soul it travels the many a door
it finds its self trapped even more

to release the soul one has to feel
feel with its heart and never ever spill

the soul wasn't trapped all those years ago
it had the emotion of many on the go
back when it was few years old
it was free to come and go without mold

now the soul is trapped again
like the mothers womb
it may never begin
the chance of survival is close to nil

look again at the soul to see only you

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  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    I like the poem very much. i like the flow and they way it is put together. and i like the last stanza

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Im going to be honest, but i dont really get this poem. it was difficult to read, and convey what you ere trying to say. i think it could have used a better structure to it, and the flow needs a tad bit of work, but we all have our flaws. i need help with flow too..lol..but anyways i honestly couldnt get the meaning of it...hmm
    Aly

  • Love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very good & well written poem... 5/5 keep it up