A very good & well written poem... 5/5 keep it up

Love it

Im going to be honest, but i dont really get this poem. it was difficult to read, and convey what you ere trying to say. i think it could have used a better structure to it, and the flow needs a tad bit of work, but we all have our flaws. i need help with flow too..lol..but anyways i honestly couldnt get the meaning of it...hmm
Aly

I like the poem very much. i like the flow and they way it is put together. and i like the last stanza