by Brittney Follett Mar 16, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
On the phone she puts on a careful tone, |
Nice ending, I like your stlye and how you have a line in between each stanza. Again, you wrote with such emotion and feeling it was just incredible! |
by Alvaro
The words in here felt true, it was good poem a gentle flow a sad tone. it played a story in my heaad once again it was great, 5/5 the one lines in between the stanzas make the poem really stand out |