by Kaila Mar 17, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
My stomachs tongue tied when I see you, |
by noha
Nice work but i know you could do better , i love the feeling behind and how deep you write ,keep write |
I really like how the last stanza is the last line of the previous stanzas. that was really cool. =]] and i really like this poem, its cute and sweet. this was a superb piece. 5/5 |
by noha
Sweet lovely poem, i can feel all the love you get behind every word you write,nice work ,keep write 5/5 |
You had wonderful imagery in this piece, I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work :) |
I can not think of a better description of being in love |