I really liked the imagery you described here with your words. I felt as if I was right there with you feeling and seeing everything you did. The flow was a bit rocky in places but overall it was a good read. *5/5*

Another great write. And again, yur descriptions and imagery were amazingly done. This piece was well written and an outstanding read. I could really feel the intensity of this piece. beautiful write. 5/5.

This poem is really sweet and beautiful. I love the way it was written. It's fun to read and reminds me of a childhood crush, or something fun and innocent like that..

I love these 2 lines

Laughing, screaming, freezing cold,
My brain is buzzing, but that's not old,

The flow is just amazing and they are actually fun to read because it just flows so well..

Then I fall back down and smile,
I'm right here where I want to be,
Don't let me fall alone,
Were just getting started.

I love the entire ending stanza. It is such a happy ending. I love your word choice and the whole tone of the poem is just so happy. This is a beautiful poem. Nice job! 5/5 =)

I can not think of a better description of being in love

You had wonderful imagery in this piece, I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work :)

Sweet lovely poem, i can feel all the love you get behind every word you write,nice work ,keep write 5/5

I really like how the last stanza is the last line of the previous stanzas. that was really cool. =]] and i really like this poem, its cute and sweet. this was a superb piece. 5/5

Nice work but i know you could do better , i love the feeling behind and how deep you write ,keep write