" So, settle. . . " << Do you mean suttle?

". . . what happened on earth" << Maybe try ' what happpened on this earth ' ?

" . . . when some thing's at birth" << that doesn't flow well - maybe changing " something is at ", i think it was just like off one syllable or something.

I love the meaning of this poem, darling. And, it's great. There were a few flow problems, but overall it was just perfect. You have a wonderful sense of what the world should be and who we all should be - now, if only it would happen, eh?

5/5

Loved it! very well writen.
the message at the end just wraps up the hole thing so well
great job 5/5
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Oh, that is so true, about making a difference, this just simply blew me away!
I love this stanza and it just stood out to me:

"The painting starts in black and white,
Color showing at the end.
The artwork coming into sight,
Sharp lines set forth to blend."

I love how its so detailed! Great work!