The Amazing Truth

by Brittany C   Mar 17, 2008


In your eyes
I see the stars
bright as the heavens
full of all our joys

Your gentle touch
always makes me blush
and my blood begins to rush.
I try to talk but you tell me to hush.

Your amazing handsome smile
always makes me want to stay a while.
Never do I want to leave you for a long while.
When I'm not with you my days are mild.

I have fallen for you baby
I will always be your lady.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem short, I like your work but it seems to have a main theme I would love to see you branch out to other venues toreally grow as a writer great job though I enjoyed them Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Good poem, nice rhyme too. if it reflects a relationship you're in - you're very lucky
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