by Alex D Mar 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
These tired hands made of splinters |
Love the title, caught my attention right away. |
Striking me down like the suns final light" |
So this will be my second attempt at replying to your poem. I gave you a full shakedown of your poem entirely and it got deleted before i could post. wrote for like 15 minutes. It pissed me off. so here goes a shorter version. I gave 5/5....but 4.25 if rating was accurate. I round up. |
So this will be my second attempt at replying to your poem. I gave you a full shakedown of your poem entirely and it got deleted before i could post. wrote for like 15 minutes. It pissed me off. so here goes a shorter version. |
by Mike Wilburn
Here's to you 5/5 |