by Indian Comma Bean Mar 17, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Body on the move |
by PygmyPuff
Reading this it made my physically bop my head to the beat. it has this affect that is so fun. The last two stanzas disrupt the flow with the inconsistent wrhyme scheme. I would deffinately try and conform them to the aabb r.s. that is with the first 3 |