by Perfectly Broken Mar 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
And he gets what he deserved |
by Sarah
Your first write, any good????? |
"Whence one has gotten so hurt." |
by ECILA ice
Your words and your ideas are very well you created your own unique powerful ambiance which i'm pretty sure more people can relate with.. being rejected. great work!! keep it up!! |
by Kaila
I loved this poem for a first poem it was amazing and it really caught my attention I love young writers (like me) because it inspires me and proves we have a say this poem was flawless and really went with my mood nice job |
This poem was absolutely amazing. It showed so much feeling and the flow worked perfect. Good job! 5/5 |