by StandStill
For a first write, it's amazing! i'm not even that good and i have almost 300 poems. you definitely have a gift, hun. the vocabulary and the flow were superb.... |
I believe that you the author got the dark feelings of rejection and heart brokenness out very poetically. Keep writing I know where you are coming from |
by VYXSIN
Wow. great first write. loved it. i can definitly relate to this, hard to get over though. |
by sweet escape
Love this poem.....it is great |
I understand this piece completely. I've been through this quite a few times as well. Anyway, for a first write, this is pretty amazing. :] Keep it up. <3 5/5. |
This poem was absolutely amazing. It showed so much feeling and the flow worked perfect. Good job! 5/5 |
by Kaila
I loved this poem for a first poem it was amazing and it really caught my attention I love young writers (like me) because it inspires me and proves we have a say this poem was flawless and really went with my mood nice job |
by ECILA ice
Your words and your ideas are very well you created your own unique powerful ambiance which i'm pretty sure more people can relate with.. being rejected. great work!! keep it up!! |
"Whence one has gotten so hurt." |
by Sarah
Your first write, any good????? |