Gone

by MELLybO0   Mar 17, 2008


Ok so nobody really understands this one. its basically about someone who changed for other people & got into trouble. life or death type of trouble. so shes in the hospital & her family is there telling her to come back.. if you still dont get it..mssg & i will explain more :] -mellyboo

walking through the hallways.
not one site to see.
came across a mirror but the reflection wasnt me.
stared into it blankly & listened to the girl plead.
"this isnt you.go back to the way you used to be"
a knot in my throat & chains in my lungs.
tears run down my face & i can no longer breathe.
eyes swollen red.huge pain in my head.
vision becoming opaque.
heart has stopped beating.
blood flow stagnant.
i hear footsteps.
cant see who it is.
but i hear singing.sobbing & i feel tears.
'please dont leave. stay with us here.'
_mellyboo[november 6,2O07]

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Kallie

    I understood it. I think I may have even without the explanation. It has great emotion, keep it up, it was pretty.