You know when.....

by Farrah   Mar 17, 2008


You know when there is this one picture
and that picture made you laugh SO hard

And then one day that picture got ruined
And you stay minutes trying to remember.....

You know when there was this one song
And that song made you sleep your whole life....

And then one day that song never helps
and you stay for hours in your bed.....

You know when there is this one place
And that place always reminded You of the best thing that happened in your life...

And then one day that place disappeared
and you stay for days trying to remember.....

You know when there is this one thing
And that thing always made you smile

And then one day that thing is gone
and you stay months trying to get that smile back.....

You know when there is this one person
and that person always made u happy....

And then one day that person had to leave
and you stay for months trying to gain that happiness....

You know when there is this one guy
and that guy you loved so much

And you had to leave that guy
and you stay for years just trying to forget him.....

If i add every moment of sadness above
It would still not describe how i feel.....

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, a very wonderful yet sad poem. 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I feel it's a very well written poem. Very emotional and touchy. I liked the style of your writing. Nice Job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A brillant poem. so sad, yet so amazing.
    very truthful, you expressed yerself so so well.
    i loved it!
    keep up the wonderful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem was sad poem... i feel a sad after reading this poem... i tell you here my favourite stanza

    You know when there is this one person
    and that person always made u happy....

    And then one day that person had to leave
    and you stay for months trying to gain that happiness....

    its such a nice stanza.. so true about love pains....

  • 16 years ago

    by Cathie

    I like how this poem starts out, but the last comment: "if i add every..."
    it makes the poem fall a part and i got disapointed because i like how the rest of the poem build this mood...

    try seeing if you can make your conclusion in an other way - and you would have made a brilliant poem!