I like how this poem starts out, but the last comment: "if i add every..."
it makes the poem fall a part and i got disapointed because i like how the rest of the poem build this mood...

try seeing if you can make your conclusion in an other way - and you would have made a brilliant poem!

This poem was sad poem... i feel a sad after reading this poem... i tell you here my favourite stanza

You know when there is this one person
and that person always made u happy....

And then one day that person had to leave
and you stay for months trying to gain that happiness....

its such a nice stanza.. so true about love pains....

A brillant poem. so sad, yet so amazing.
very truthful, you expressed yerself so so well.
i loved it!
keep up the wonderful work.

I feel it's a very well written poem. Very emotional and touchy. I liked the style of your writing. Nice Job.

Wow, a very wonderful yet sad poem. 5/5, Em