I really like this poem, good job, and keep writing i think you have great potential

Your poem made me smile. To be young and in love it is so beautiful.

Laugh with me
For a little while
Grin at me
I love your smile.

What a great stanza. This made me smile.

Hold my hand
In your firm, warm grasp
Meet my eyes
Fall to the grass.

I remember rolling in the grass with mmy husband when we were young..it was so much fun.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Aw, this poem is adorable. Beautiful and touching.
It's just so cute, it's gotten me in a good mood =) awww I love this poem.
5/5

Cheers xo