Okay its good write and great feel of love inside but to be honest i want you to read it atleast for one time before posting it to see if there is wrong words but you got the talent and deserve 5/5

I really enjoyed the idea behind the poem its so true to thoughts of love. Great job

Emma

Freaking great poem and i loved it short and sweet and to the point great job

Great job. I really enjoyed this piece. Very well written and very inspirational. keep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Though the use of words were simple still you have managed to express a great love that lies behind each and every word of your poem 5/5