I enjoy reading this poem 'coz it looks like a tongue twister and it consist of a nice message.. most especially the last stanza 'coz it comprises a very inspiring and true meaning which says that it depend on the individual whether you'll let the negative feeling over come you.

Your choice of words were great and the title was great. [I loved it] and the emotions are portrayed quite nicely. I'd say a 5/5 indefinitely. (: