by Wings Of Flames Mar 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
We held our eyes together, |
This was a well written poem, I feel, however, I didn't much care for it. Although it had good rhythm, as well as good rhymes and was deep, I couldn't really...feel it I guess. I just think that the piece wasn't as alive as it could have been. Sorry. |
by Mello193
I love this one too |
I love it |
I love it |