by ECILA ice
I enjoy reading this because of the simple sweet thought that include in every stanza.. it was too serene and gracefull that made it really nice. great job! |
WOW! Noha! This is amazing! Your writing skills have improved so much! I don't even really like love poems, but this was just amazing! Your word choice, and grammar were very good. The flow and rhymes were very good. Everything was just very good. Haha. |
by noha
Thanks cayce , i still try sometimes it comes write and sometimes wrong but i find my self learn every time |
Beautifully written and great concept. I loved how easily I could read it... and the ending was really good! 5/5 |
by Live WeLL
Wow this is amazing! I tried to pick out my favorite stanza but I just couldn't choose one. each stanza has soooo much meaning and you have great talent to be able to write this. The flow is flawless - it just carries you right thru the poem and it is such a deep poem as well. It has so much meaning and you really described love in such a beautiful way! |
by SpEcIaLmE
I loved this poem the emotion and the way u expressed it was excellent |
Nice poem really liked it.=) |
by Brittany C
I loved this poem. It reminds me of me and my bf's relationship :D I think that your poem tells the truth. I love the rhyming and how easy it was to read, understand, and to relate to. 5/5 |
by sweet escape
Love works in ways |
Aww very beautiful and cute poem indeed. i love it alot. the way you defined love with such a rhyming, you really did a great job |
by Blissful
Aww this was just beautiful and oh so sweet. I love being able to see this beautiful emotion through your eyes because you described everything so flawlessly. Well done my dear I truly enjoyed reading this. *5/5* |
by SpEcIaLmE
I love this poem so much, its so emotional and true, "love is magic" |