by vaibhav shah Mar 17, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Where are those sweet days? |
by Abha
Good work, you made me nostalgic, The childhood and Schooldays can never be retraced but engraved in our memories forever, True expression. |
I really like the first part of it..then it gets a tad iffy for me. Overall, I think you did a good job though. There is some odd sentence structure, that may detract from the overall poem....good though! |
by Lonely Rider
Brilliant write... |