Comments : Yearning for Bygone Days

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Brilliant write...

    "Homework for me was a huge burden
    I had to beg them always for pardon"

    ya..it reminds me of my schooldays... coming back home wit loads of homework... how i used to grumble about dat... bt still i miss those days...

    "Gone are the days spent is the age
    Trapped I am in a parrotâ??s cage
    Longing for those beautiful days
    Can anyone tell me where are they"

    ^^loved these lines... overall impressive work...

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    I really like the first part of it..then it gets a tad iffy for me. Overall, I think you did a good job though. There is some odd sentence structure, that may detract from the overall poem....good though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Abha

    Good work, you made me nostalgic, The childhood and Schooldays can never be retraced but engraved in our memories forever, True expression.