by Lonely Rider
Brilliant write... |
I really like the first part of it..then it gets a tad iffy for me. Overall, I think you did a good job though. There is some odd sentence structure, that may detract from the overall poem....good though! |
by Abha
Good work, you made me nostalgic, The childhood and Schooldays can never be retraced but engraved in our memories forever, True expression. |