The lost Love

by vaibhav shah   Mar 17, 2008


Was it a magic of my love
Or the miracle of your ignorance
That forced you to give me a call
Nothing happened new
You were the same without any change
I thought you have realized
Your mistake
That mistake which you never committed
As you think
But I was wrong
You spoke to me to convey a message
A message so shocking and absurd
Though it was something real
Which could never be expressed
I wanted to shout at you
But something prevented me
It was the charm of your soft voice
The voice which could make me forget
Even my own identity and self
How could I tell you my state?
But
I just want to pray for you
May Almighty God bless you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow
    this is so sad and amazing at the same time
    keep on writing great poems
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful, you got a great feeling and i know how to lose someone you realy love but if realy you love you cant hate or shout but you can forgive,nice work and work hard on the flow it will be better

  • 16 years ago

    by Abha

    The viewership of this poem is great,

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is really good too! I'm impressed! Where you say 'I thought you have realized' it should be 'I thought you had realized' and 'prey' should be 'pray' and 'almighty' should probably be capitalized.
    All grammar forgotten though, I really, really liked this. It's got a good message, and it's clear if you think about it...very good.

    Toni!

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