This is really good too! I'm impressed! Where you say 'I thought you have realized' it should be 'I thought you had realized' and 'prey' should be 'pray' and 'almighty' should probably be capitalized.
All grammar forgotten though, I really, really liked this. It's got a good message, and it's clear if you think about it...very good.

Toni!

The viewership of this poem is great,

Beautiful, you got a great feeling and i know how to lose someone you realy love but if realy you love you cant hate or shout but you can forgive,nice work and work hard on the flow it will be better

Wow
this is so sad and amazing at the same time
keep on writing great poems
5/5 :)